Many of you know I write poetry, and usually, it’s quite erotic—whether it be romantic and erotic or downright dirty and erotic.
Today, I’ve got a new poem for you—but it’s not as erotic as I normally write. It’s getting back to my poetry roots, somewhat: a little darker, a little deeper, and in many ways, a little more raw. There was a time all the poetry I wrote was based on something that happened to me, or a relationship I had; this piece definitely flows in the same vein.
I hope you enjoy it.
BECAUSE OF THE WAY HE HELD ME
by
Jade A. Waters
Two silhouettes in a room
Filled with smoke, voices loud
He came to me, cornered me
Whispered, “Won’t you come with me?”
His arm twining round my waist, pulling me close
And I did, knowing for certain
It would be because of the way he held me.
Our dance began—magnificent, tremendous,
Two rushing rivers of lust,
Two colliding powers of desperate force.
When he stared into my eyes, I saw everything—
The world, the stars, the secrets to our souls.
It was all wrong
It was so right
But it was because of the way he held me.
Together, we moved
Hips joined, breaths one
A fire so deep the earth trembled, rolled, split open
A tsunami of sensation crashing over him, over me
Over us.
We were the tide, controlling rivers, lakes, and oceans,
We were the universe
All because of the way he held me.
In the dark of the night, we lingered close
His words more whispers, his fingers tracing swirls
Over the tender spread of my hips—
“Because you’re mine,” he’d say.
And I would cave, succumb
And feel
Making wrong a broken word I didn’t understand
Because this was right
And all because of the way he held me.
Now, the wash of memory sweeps across a distant shore
But his hands are still on me, his lips still near
The brand of a lifetime
So deep in these pores.
And I know it will be this way,
A long, long while
Because of the way he held me.
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Thank you for joining me for this one.
XX,
Jade
Really nice poem, Jade.
Thank you so much! XX
Such beautiful imagery, Jade, and such sadness…
xxx
Thank you, Tamsin! XO
This is a real beauty Jade. You conveyed so much with such a light hand. Just lovely. xxx
Oh, thank you so much, Malin. That means a lot to me! 🙂 XX
Deeper, darker, and raw… well, it works for me. Jade, this is a moving piece you’ve written, and I absolutely love it. “The wash of memory sweeps across a distant shore.” Oh, wow. That is such an image. This one is going to stay with me a while, I can tell.
Oh my goodness, Lace. That is such a tremendous compliment, and I’m so glad you liked it. XX
Immensely powerful – like the undertow on a seemingly calm river, this pulled me down down down. Loved it.
xx Dee
Oh, thank you so much Dee—both for reading and for the kind words. I’m so happy you enjoyed it. It’s definitely a very personal, dear piece for me. Thank you again. XX-Jade
Beautiful, haunting, raw. Lovely.
Thank you so much, Jade!
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